tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7939808352367917100.post8644169940303200994..comments2023-03-25T06:55:39.364-05:00Comments on Glob: The Nonfiction PartFodozhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04838459994697464427noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7939808352367917100.post-84109047457656186002008-08-28T19:44:00.000-05:002008-08-28T19:44:00.000-05:00This is awesome! It reads a bit like a lyric essay...This is awesome! It reads a bit like a lyric essay. I think you could get really good at writing lyric essays. You organize each paragraph by topic, like an essay, and you have a thesis (who am I; I can't really tell you that in full, but I can give you hints that might reveal my person) but your language can be so poetic. It's also fairly dream-like; you weave in and out topics. And I love how you seem to claim that the whole assignment is futile (all you can give are lies), yet you try to complete it anyway. It is sort of metaphoric; we want to know who we are, but we don't, so we just grasp at the things we do know and try to make sense of it all. Anyway, I love it! You are honest, and honesty makes for great writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7939808352367917100.post-90532806284379293052008-08-28T15:46:00.000-05:002008-08-28T15:46:00.000-05:00My person (al introduction)GENIUSthis was so witty...My person (al introduction)<BR/><BR/>GENIUS<BR/>this was so witty and real. if i was in your class i wouldn't want to go after you that's for sure.<BR/><BR/>I would say I know you pretty well (snicker), but it's neat to read something you've written about yourself. I love your descriptions.<BR/><BR/>great, A+breezyluciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04955553609607359985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7939808352367917100.post-19545968975126361782008-08-28T15:28:00.000-05:002008-08-28T15:28:00.000-05:00i like this lin. real good. you are so cute. yay f...i like this lin. real good. you are so cute. yay for omaha and catholic roots. yay for toe nail polish and not so yay for having to pee and ignoring it. we all know what happens...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com